Sunday, July 18, 2010

a change of pace

it's the loose tooth
that you like to play with
and wiggle around.
the long-grown hair
that you like to twirl through
your fingers but needs trimmed.
the song you love to sing
again and again until one time
it's just stuck in your head.
the favorite pair of jeans
that you wish you could always wear
but they need washed.
they just need washed.

1 comment:

  1. Nice ending-the vagueness as to the subject behind these metaphors is perfect, making us think of the habits we have that just need analyzed from time to time. Nice job man.

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